2006-05-30 nameless: It makes... completely no sense what so ever. but thats if you try to think logically and reason it out. It speeks of a place that is unnatainable, and therefore desirable. ah... the joys of poetry. I like it. It's nice. 2006-06-01 RiddleRose: thank you! if you meditate... you might be able to see what i mean. but then again, it could be completely different for you! but no, it's not unnatainable. i've been there many times... 2006-06-03 iippo: I love this. It makes sense, or it makes me sense it, or something... But it works for more situations than just meditating, too (praying, lying next to the true love, perhaps even waiting to die, or before going to surgery). 2006-06-04 RiddleRose: i wouldn't know... of the ones you listed, the only one i do is meditating... XD [RiddleRose]: 298.Meditation
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In this place nothing has meaning, not time, not place, nothing has meaning but to be still. Only in stillness can you feel, feel the stillness, but the stillness can have motion in this place, because nothing has meaning, not even words. So move with the ebb and flow of the stillness and don't break it. A thousand years could pass by in this place with this tide, but it would feel only like a few minutes, and you would emerge young and fresh still. This is the place. Once I am there I may begin.
-Nameless-
Have you considered doing anything with this afterwards, like consciously work it into a story or a novel, for example? Or write more while meditating and then edit/compose something out of it? I'd love to read something like that...
i had thought of doing something with it, but i had thought more along the lines of a sort of collection of things like this, a collection of meditations. i think part of the beauty of it is that it's not entirely conscious, or rather, it's a higher form of consciousness that was speaking through me. so i think working it into a story, a thing with a concise beginning middle and end might not work so well. but i will certainly be writing more while meditating, and i'll probably put it up here! i'm glad you liked it!